Neat!
Could've used color though. And you spelled 'Obstacle' wrong at the beginning of the movie. Keep up the good work!
Neat!
Could've used color though. And you spelled 'Obstacle' wrong at the beginning of the movie. Keep up the good work!
my next project is going to be in color. since i'm new with the program, i thought i'd keep it simple. thanks for the advice though!
Good, but...
There's only two characters as you said. Add some more, then resubmit this, I'm sure you'll get a great score. Until then, I can only judge you on what I see. I see two unique characters standing in a room. Keep up the good work!
Haha; yes, that's really empty for now I know x)
I've lot's of other characters that wait to share this place; but I don't want to unveil them until they appear in the story; so until the first episode, only this two x)
Anyways, thank for the review!
Hoping seeing another of your review on the not-real-first-episode =)
Well, yeah.
I love your animation and the original storyboards were nice to see, but I would make it longer or string more clips together. Thanks for the 'toon!
Thank you, I'm going to make a collection once I have between 5 and 10 quick little things.
Good, but you kinda stole some humor from Oney...
I know you got the rights to use the music, but the type of humor was kinda taken, at least with Oney's music. But the rest of the cartoon was great!
im not sure what you mean by humor taken..
I didnt add in oneys music till last night as a last minute dub.
I was going to use TIMID girl as previously heard in Facebook and Twitter...
but my brother and i decided to use the other two.
thanks
What pivot is this?
I want to know! Otherwise, great video. Just add a preloader next time.
This is Pivot 2.2.5
Well now!
I was on the forums in the animation section and saw your topic. I go here and - not even have seen the previous episode, am thrilled by your work. I am sure to see the first one, and will mention this to my co-workers. Thanks for the time!
Thanks for checking it out! There will definitely be more...and won't take me several years this time;)
Good.
If this is your first flash, I'm pleased. You should be proud of yourself. But add more to it next time.
no worries i will add more :D
I have to agree with Roomax to a certain extent...
The music is a bit harsh, but there's a mute button, so that's okay. This is really helpful to me because I have some students that I teach flash to, and they need a demonstration on how to make a preloader. Thanks for the game/video and keep up the good work.
r u gunna acctually show them this or ur own version?
SO TRUE!
This is amazing. Love it. Great work, and I hope to see more from you.
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